UstySsia
UstySsia
  28 września 2009 (pierwszy post)

Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie tego wypracowania i poprawienie ewentualnych błędów. Angielski nie jest moją mocną stroną, co na pewno wyjdzie w tej pracy;)

My house is small, but very homely. In my home ist bathroom, kitchen, four room, and corridor. In front of the door is corridor, and bathroom. On the left is a kitchen, and my brother room. In the kitchen is a table, fridge, cooker, and cupboards. In my brother room is a big bed, small table, wardrobe, tv and tower hi- fi. The walls are orange. On the right is a my parents room. Behind is a my sister room.In the room is a big wardrobe, bed, bedside table, lamp, color carpet, and tv. The walls are orange and black, but images hang on walls. Stairs up is a my small room. My room is a very modern. The walls are purple and blue. On the left there is a bed. In front standing a desk with computer, and above over there are books and a phone. There is a lot of space at the centre of the room. On the right standing small table, chair, wardrobe, and tv. I love my room.

Unconcerned
Unconcerned
  28 września 2009
UstySsia:
In front standing a desk with computer

In front standing a desk with computer on it, and...
Ja bym to tak napisała ;)
Reszta, jak dla mnie jest ok :tak:
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Anja
  28 września 2009
UstySsia:
In my brother room

In my brother's room

27.313

obsordine
obsordine
  28 września 2009
UstySsia:
In my home ist bathroom, kitchen, four room, and corridor

This home has four rooms,bathroom,kitchen and the corridor.

UstySsia:
brother room.

brother's.

UstySsia:
In the kitchen is a table, fridge, cooker, and cupboards.

używaj there is/are

UstySsia:
In the room is a big wardrobe, bed,

Staraj się nie zaczynac zdań od tego samego 'In the'
zastap to może In this room there is/are.

UstySsia:
The walls are orange and black, but images hang on walls

The walls are orange and black with pictures which are hanging on them. (?)

UstySsia:
Stairs up is a my small room.

is my small room bez 'a'.

UstySsia:
My room is a very modern

bez 'a'.

UstySsia:
In front standing a desk with computer, and above over there are books and a phone.

In the front there is a desk with a computer on it ,and above there are books and a phone.

UstySsia:
On the right standing small table, chair, wardrobe, and tv. I love my room.

stands a small table....
UstySsia
UstySsia
  28 września 2009

dziękuję bardzo :)

AaStRuMm
AaStRuMm
  28 września 2009
UstySsia:
My house is small, but very homely.

but is very - chyba

UstySsia:
n my home ist bathroom, kitchen, four room, and corridor

In my home are - bo wymieniasz dużo pomieszczen czyli are do liczby mnogiej
AaStRuMm
AaStRuMm
  28 września 2009
UstySsia:
The walls are orange and black, but images hang on walls.

The walls are orange and black but images are hang on the walls. -->the bo na jakichs określonych ścianach.
AaStRuMm
AaStRuMm
  28 września 2009
UstySsia:
Behind is a my sister room

Behind is sister's room

UstySsia:
n the kitchen is a table

In the kitchen are i wymieniasz ...

UstySsia:
and my brother room

brotjer's room
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